to all you song writers and poets out ther this post is for you. i'm a writer so feel free to post your zombie related poems/lyrics here

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...it's short but hey its something right?
it doesn't have a name so bear with me...
Forfeit my life to save this group of friends
Last night i hoped this wouldn't be the end
A knife and a gun is all that's survived
Without you guys i would have surely died-
You looked out for me and now i return the favor
These feelings i have for you are all this heart savors
As i leave this world in exchange for anew,
This dreaded onslaught will forever continue
I give up my life to replenish yours
I give the best of luck as they break down the door....
no way that was cool. as long as it means something to you it's great. from the zombie's point of view, huh? lol
did you really write this?
it's really good. keep it up
Haikou (gesundheit!):

I woke up today
And a zombie was outside.
I made an omelette

Another,

WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS?
I got bitten by some guy,
Now I want some brains...
who/what is Haikou?...
either way, this style of writing is interesting
oh those i remember those, i first learned about those in like 7th grade. that's cool but i'm more comfortable with writing the ones that rhyme but i love reading these, yo Seneca write some more. lol... oh and thankx Brigitta for the definition
agree! love the haiku!
nice one i has that happy-go-lucky childhood story feel to it... it's awesome
I woke up with blood all over me,
with a zombie right on top of me.
i kicked him in the face and he ran off without a trace.
LOL really short!!
it's cool it doesn't matter how short it is, as long as you made it and you had fun doing it, that makes it special... huh got kinda high-spirited there for a sec, my bad lol
bump >.>

I was rocking out and I started matching lyrics of the song with zombie stuff..
The original song is "You've gotta belong to it" by Pantera...
Here's the original lyrics:

Build an inner door, drop and then explore
You smoke your head on straight, then drink
Your woes away
Some might not understand possession that's beyond your head
You recognize it, while some ignore it
Avoid the masses, you got to belong to it

So the music is your friend
Well it's the roof above my head
So seriously I take the will that never breaks
Some might not understand, the possession that controls your hands


It's power and sin
And then you've got whisky and smoke
And it's all a man could need, to plant the perfect seed
To disembody me
Making more like you and me


What I got so far, (About 10 minutes of work so not so good so far tell me anything that would make it better please) If it's in parentheses I could use some help with new words. A lot of the parts are pretty bad on their own >_<

Barricade up that door, dont go out and explore
Blow their head off and all your woes will go away
Some might not understand, but you've got to hit them in the head
You recognize it, while some ignore it, avoid their masses, youve got to run from them!

So that one ate your friendd
well I just smacked it in the head
with my crowbar that never breaks
some might not understand, but sometimes you got to use your hands

(It's power and sin
And then you've got whisky and smoke
And it's all a man could need, to plant the perfect seed
To disembody me
Making more like you and me)

bleh not too good
Didnt get last verse >_<
instead of It's power and sin I was thinking something a long the lines of "If their teeth break your skin" But I couldnt think of anything after it.
Comments and help would be appreciated :D
damn dude... nice connections. good work you efforts haven't gone unnoticed

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