Add on what happens next in the story, introduce new characters, or whatever. Just please try to not make characters die out of nowhere, have super powers, turn into monkeys, etc. unless it has to happen in the story.

This is a month into a class 3-4 infection. (Fresher zombies can run)

Start: Sam Griggs looked down the scope of the rifle from the second story window of the gas station.
"I see 4 of them," He said over to Jason who was looking through a pair of binoculars.
"I only see 3," Jason replied.
"One trapped in the silver Toyota."
"Ha, I see it, look at the bastard squirm."
"We gonna go or not?" Scott asked from the back of the room.
"Yeah, Sam give us cover." Jason said as he walked towards the door pulling the hood over his head and tightening the bandana around his mouth. Scott did the same and they drew their silenced USP pistols and silently got out of the building. They quietly snuck across the street and hid behind a minivan in the parking lot of the grocery store.
"Get inside and get all the food you can in that grocery cart, then we rush it back to the Humvee." Jason whispered. Scott nodded and peeked around the corner. He saw the three infected and they all looked pretty old.
"I'm pretty sure these are shamblers." Scott said.
"They better be, I don't need any more of these things chasing full speed after me."
"Heh, yeah. Make a break for it on your signal, man."

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out of roleplaying:
Thats right, I did kill The Kidd, just like how he killed off Pete, who was much more important for the substance of the story. If you're going to call me an idiot and ORDER me to get off the story then maybe you should get off the story.
They all step out of the chopper. The Kidd walks up to Isaac and they exchange a handshake and a smile. After introductions all around, everyone settles in the compound. Isaac looks over at the group and tells them to come with him. They follow him to what appears to be a makeshift lab/holding cell. There are 5 zombies in one of the cells. Seeing the group, they reach through the bars and start moaning. "What the hell?!" Sam says to Isaac. "We've been holding them here to observe their behavior, and we had a doctor trying to work on a cure," Isaac replies. He then tells them the unfortunate story of how the Doctor was bitten. "There used to be only four of them in there," he says while pointing at one of the zombies. The one he was pointing at was missing most of its left arm and appeared to be wearing a tattered lab coat. "After the Doc died, my boys and I just kept 'em around hoping another person would come along who might be able to work on a cure." After asking around, it turned out that no one in the group was a scientist. "Well, thats always been your luck, buddy," says Kidd with a grin. "Now how about getting something to eat." After meals and showers, everyone retires to their sleeping quarters. Jason finally was able to sleep peacefully. There were Isaac's men patrolling around the entire building, and they seemed pretty isolated. Little did any of them know how false their sense of security really was...
Pete opens his eyes wide. He hears groans... hundreds of groans. "Oh no... I'm NOT gonna die again!!!!" He leaps out of the bed and wakes up Jason and Sam. "Uhhh....zombies wadda you think!!!" he answers when they ask what's going on. Both immediately jump up and grab their pistol and AK-47. Pete takes out his own AK-47 and runs to the entrances and immediately starts shooting into the horde. Everybody else wakes up, and grabs their own weapon. Everybody charges at the zombies and start to blow out their brains and whack them senseless. After shooting one in the head, Jason takes a look around and sees Isaac and a few of his henchmen up on the top of another building. "Feed zombies feed!!!" "I dont think I'm the only one going insane..." Jason mumbles, then yells at Isaac: "Isaac! What the heck are you doing? Get down here!!!" "Muahahaha!!! I don't think I wanna go down there or I'll be zombie food too! Gentlemen, THIS is my ultimate army of zombies!!!!!!"
Oh, no... here we go again! Jason thinks. He blasts another few zombies to the ground then tries to run to the building. One of the henchmen pulls out a machine gun and blasts multiple rounds into the ground in front of Jason. He screeches to a halt and starts shooting back. "Don't let the insanity of all this take over you, too!!!" "Oh my little friend, its not insanity, its the craving for the ultimate power! An army of the undefeatable undead!" Ok, so that MAY be pretty cool buts he's definetely still insane. Jason runs back and asks for Arnolds flamethrower and Arnold responses with an 'MMMMPPPHHH!!!" and then drops his head in dissapointment. The two switch guns and Jason runs back over. "The two henchmen start firing at him but miss, and Jason begins firing (literally) at the building. It almost immediately is covered in flames, and the two henchmen run around on fire and fall into the zombie horde which causes a chain reaction: the fire starts spreading from zombie to zombie. But Isaac hops off the building and runs away. Jason dashes after him and fires at him but can't quite catch him. He jumps into a running helicopter that the gang hadn't even known about and starts to fly into the air, but not before Jason manages to blast the entire bottom of the chopper with flames, but with no effect. The chopper flies away. Jason runs back to see that all the zombies are dead from flames. "Isaac got away!" Jason reports. "Well thats good, right? At least somebody did..." "No, that's a bad thing! Isaac is an insane maniac that gathers huge hordes of zombies and takes care of them, and whenever he has an apparent enemy he lets the zombies loose at them. He says he controls an 'army of the undefeatable undead'." "Oh... well thats different. Did the Kidd leave too? Cause I dont see him around here." "I think he flew the chopper away." "Hmmm... we're dead. We're good as dead." "No, we're not." comes a voice from a distance away. It's a man in a white lab coat. "I am the Doctor. The Doctor they said was dead. But I'm not. I found the cure. My name's Spud. Doctor Spud." "You found the cure? Really?" "Indeed I did. It was my own secret project actually, before they found me doing it and threw me in another cabin. I guess they didnt want the cure." "No, they didnt. That's for sure. Anyway, my name's Jason." "Pleasure to meet you." "Name's Arnold." "Nice to meet you too." "Names Pete." "Nice to meet you." "Hello, I'm Loan." "Very nice to meet you ma'am." After everybody is introduced they set out on a plan to find Isaac and make it to a safehouse. "They forgot all about this map and left it behind. It shows the location of their safehouse." "That ain't too far, only a few miles away! We can make it there by sunrise." "Let's go! Pack up everybody!" Spud says and waits. "Aren't you gonna pack up, Spud?" Sam asks him. "I- I have nothing to pack up." He just looks at him for a few moments. "Oh! I haven't met you yet. Hello." "Oh! I'm Sam. Sam Griggs." "Pleasure." Once everybody finishes packing up their stuff they head out in the direction of the safehouse. And lo and behold they arrive in another city by sunrise. "Wow...not a zombie in sight!" Jason says amazed as he looks around. They spend an hour or two looking for the safehouse when suddenly they hear a familiar voice yelling down to them. "Pete! Jason! Sam! Loan!!! ARNOLD!!!! How ya cookin'?" Everybody looks around before Arnold sees someone up on the roof of a hospital. He points to him. "Is that..." Sam asks before being cut off by Jason: "It is." Up on the roof of the hospital is Will.
OK, so I believe they flew away to a new camp which I think got attacked by zombies, then one chopper made it out (with our favorite gang of zombie killers onboard) and they landed in a new camp. It turns out that 3J is a bad guy ( I think that's who it was) and the gang tries to escape again to get out of his clutches. Pete is shot down in the escape. (Extension) Jason goes insane and kills The Kidd to take over the chopper and return to revive Pete. Pete is revived and the bad guys are all dead. (Real story) They fly to a new camp and meet a man named Isaac. He turns out to be crazy and he sends a zombie army after the gang. Jason tries to stop Isaac but he gets onto a chopper and flies to the city to make a new zombie army which has been destroyed. Now finished fighting the gang sets out to look for Isaac and stop him. (With Pete back, the substance of the story is completed again. That's the meaning of the extension.) And now in the city the gang meets Will again, who has set up a new base inside another hospital. (I'll tell you the truth I think the story's going through one big loophole right now.)
That's what I just said...
Do you have any idea how HARD that's gonna be? :) The loophole has destroyed the story entirely...to fix it will be as hard as telling Michael Moore that he's skinny.
so wats goin on now i got lost when the kidd was introduced
stop stop stop stop! (out of roleplaying) Now this stroy has gotten more borring and more boring due to the fact that it is going in circles as many of you have metioned earlyier, witrh the twists and all, the story was good but now its garbage even if we start from the hospital it will still suck! this is why I tried to end the story in my first add-on ( read it) I think on page 3 or 4. anyway I tried to end the story for a reason, that all this wouldn't happen now someone make up an ending and maybe we can start all over with a different disscussion and a different stroy! (this is all a suggestion)
I can TOTALLY do that! 7:)

In roleplaying:
Jason looks grimly at Will and pulls the curtains back together. Then, he pauses, and then gets a wickedly evil smirk on his face. He opens the curtains and opens the window, and starts making faces and waves his arms. He makes farting sounds. "Hey zombies, up here! Come geeeettt meeeee!" "You fool! You've killed us all!" "It was my pleasure, Will." Will becomes red in the everywhere, and shoves Jason out the window, to the zombie horde below. My life is flashing before my eyes... Jason thinks quickly before plummeting into the horde of zombies. I remember it all... He thinks as the zombies start to recover and surround him. I was born...my parents loved me so much... He recalls as the zombies come closer. I grew big fast...I was almost as tall as the door knob by the time I was four... He thinks as the zombies start to pick him up. I nearly flunked 3rd grade in Elementary, and got almost all Ds on every report card in 4th... He remembers as the zombies start to tug at his clothes. I went into Middle school, that went surprisingly fast... He thinks smugly as the zombies start ripping apart his shirt and grab at his arms. I dropped out of High School and spent my days hunting and trying to get home schooled... He thinks as the zombies start nibbling at his left arm. Then...I was mugged that horrible horrible day. He remembers as the zombies rip off a chunk of his arm and devour it. After that, the zombie outbreak started a month later. He remembers as the zombies tear his arm out at the joint. I lost my best friends Sam and Scott. Pete came. Jason recalls as the zombies start chomping at his stomach. Then everything else happened to follow up to this. Why did I just do that?! He yells at himself in intense anger as the zombies tear open his stomach. I went insane. Thats why. I failed. I'm no better than any other zombie fighter. I'm just an average schmoe. He mutters as the zombies continue eating at his stomach. Well, I guess this is the end of being a zombie fighter. It's time to become a human fighter. I wonder how Will tastes...


THE END
thats was very morbid
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