Report from amsterdam naval base.

i have written a report of a mission from the amsterdam naval base. I would like to hear some comments

Report from: Commander De Vries
Location: Amsterdam Naval Base
Date: 01 – 05 -2009
Regarding: Security Cam Repair

Summary:
Security camera's outside the safety zone (Zone C) have been damaged during a storm. Engineering team bravo has been attacked in their attempt to repair the security cameras.
Security cameras in Zone C have been lost.
Zone C shall from now on be noted as a Danger Zone.

From the engineering team the following are wounded but not infected:
1.Sergeant Pieter Koning.
2.Private Micheal Delange.

The following are infected by bite and brought over to the lab after termination:
1.Private Marcella Koning.

The following are missing and/or pressumed death.
1.Private Roy Koerke

Full report:
On May 1st 2009 about 1700 hours the security cameras in zone C went down. Zone C is about 2 Km outside the Safety zone. The Cameras are important for defense purposes. The order was given to engineering team bravo to repair the security cameras in zone C.
Regulation requires 2 privates to accompany them on missions outside the safety zone.

They left the base at 1715 hours and left the Safety Zone at 1723 hours. On the way to zone C they encountered no enemies.they safely reached Zone C at 1735 hours.
The engineering team started with the repairs. During the repairs one of the poles on which the security cams rests, fell over. It is suspected that the sound made by the falling pole attracted the enemy.

During a fire fight with the enemy. Sergeant Pieter Koning got knocked against a wall and lost consciousness. Private Marcella Koning is bitten in her leg while carrying Sergeant Pieter Koning. Private Micheal Delange takes over command and gives the order to flee. In their attempt to flee Private Micheal Delange is hurt by friendly fire. Private Roy Koerke is MIA and presumed death.

Sergeant Pieter Koning is admitted at the Hospital with a concusion.
Private Micheal Delange has sustained a gunshot to the leg and will be send to Safety island for new assignments.
Private Marcella Koning has been bitten and terminated. Her body has been transferred to the lab and will be studied.
Private Roy Koerke is MIA and presumed death. No rescue mission will be planned.

Zone C has been marked Danger Zone. No further attempt will be made to repair the cameras in this zone.