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I hope to get some feedback on this story. I could see it in my mind instantly… made me wish I had video equipment. “What You Are” Int: In a dark garage a fatigued-looking woman in her late twenties lifts a wooden bird feeder above her head, then smashes it onto the concrete floor. She picks up a few of the pieces and brings them into the kitchen of her home. Inside, shafts of light shine thr…