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Hey guys! I just joined this site, and it looks pretty damn cool! Alright, so i love the zombie genre and everything that goes with it. I recently decided to try my hand at writing some fiction. This is my first attempt. im an avid reader but never wrote anything. ok let me know what you think:   My father used to tell me how the world came to be how it is.  “Before all this,” He’d say,” we had e…