Posted on June 15, 2009 at 6:00pm
Hey, this is the first draft of something I wrote last night. I'd really like to get some feed back from all of you guys and hear some suggestions of how to improve this and future sections.
Section 1: One Year Later
The creature walked down the street. Unlike others afflicted with its hunger, those of his kind seemed in a perpetual state of hunting. The others seemed as though to stumble across their meals. Before his illness, he had been a… Continue