"You should make the teeth wounds darker. The way they are now looks like there are just teeth marks imprinted in the skin and it bruised rather then actually broke the skin. Love the coloring, though. The way it looks like its spreading is cool."
"see this is way better then with all the blood because a real bite looks like that not like a dog attacked and ripped their whole hand up and great placing because it looks like you tried to push the zombie away and it got you"