Life is hard, it's even harder when you're stupid-John Wayne

Here's a story i'm doing for a college project.  Thought i'd put a few chapters on here, see what you guys think.  It ain't expert grade or anything, so excuse the grammar, crappy writing, ect.  enjoy

Chapter 1

The sun did little to warm his nerves…

Just as a disclaimer, i wrote this for my creative writing course.  It's a bit rushed and choppy, but that's cause i was given a limit to how long it could be.  So it's not what i wanted it to be, but i thought y'know, maybe you guys would appreciate it. So here you go.

The cold and frigid air blew in through the open window. Its icy touch kissed the watcher’s cheek stinging it a little. He quickly rubbed the flakes that tickled his face away and continued to look out to the…