I hope to get some feedback on this story. I could see it in my mind instantly… made me wish I had video equipment.
“What You Are”
Int:
In a dark garage a fatigued-looking woman in her late twenties lifts a wooden bird feeder above her head, then smashes it onto the concrete floor. She picks up a few of the pieces and brings them into the kitchen of her home.
Inside, shafts of light shine through spaces between the plywood sheets covering the windows.…
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