Hey, this is the first draft of something I wrote last night. I'd really like to get some feed back from all of you guys and hear some suggestions of how to improve this and future sections.
Thanks Everybody!
Section 1: One Year Later
The creature walked down the street. Unlike others afflicted with its hunger, those of his kind seemed in a perpetual state of hunting. The others seemed as though to stumble across their meals. Before his illness, he had been a…
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