And you thought you knew what hell was-crash and burn

this is my first story so let me know if you like it

It was a simple mission get in evacuate the city and get out, not hard right, man was I ever wrong. I sat in my seat quietly as the captin gave us briefing. "We go in gaurd the gate and get out." He yelled in a vain attempt to speak over the roar of the engine. "If were lucky we wont have to fire a bullet." "whats the fun in that?" A young private next to me spoke up. Captin sat back down not paying him any mind. He was new hadn't even had a taste of what it was like to be in real combat.

One of the pilots up in the cockpit started hacking in a attempt to clear his throat. He had been held up in the infirmary along with a few other soilders with some wierd kind of flu. But he loved his job and still insisted on taking us on taking us to the dropoff point.

I noticed another soilder get up and sit in the empty seat next to me. He tapped on my helmet to get my attention. "Hey Garett haven't seen you since Iraq." He said in a happy tone. "How's it been man?" I turned and looked at him surprised to see it being my good friend Jonathin. "Alright I guess." I replied to him.

Whatever else he was going to say was drowned out by a fit of coughing from the pilot. Blood started pouring out of his mouth with each cough. He fell into what seemed like a seizure, his head rocked back and I got a look at his face. He was deathly pale. Blood was pouring out of both his nose and his eyes. Then without warning his eyes suddenly flew open pure white and lifeless as if he was dead. The second pilot put a hand on his shoulder, big mistake the creature took a whole chunk out of his arm and went straight up to his neck. Blood sprayed on the windshield up front.

Before I knew what had happened the helicopter went out of control, captin flew up to the front where that monster was and that was the last I saw of him. All I can remember afterwords was clinging to my seatbelt so hard my fingernails bled out, and pain lots of pain,and screams then totall blackness followed afterwords.

short I know but let me know if you want more and i'll get started right away